Very exciting chapter... you were able to describe everything so intensely that I found myself unconsciously getting closer and closer to the screen and barely on my seat by the time it was over.
Oooo... I know there isn't much left to this story... hopefully I can finish it soon. I want to just pour the words into my head sometimes because reading feels slow when you share time on a computer. *sighs*
I hope this got lots of reviews on the other sites you posted it on because this is amazing and deserves tons of praise!!!
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Date: 2010-09-18 02:00 am (UTC)Oooo... I know there isn't much left to this story... hopefully I can finish it soon. I want to just pour the words into my head sometimes because reading feels slow when you share time on a computer. *sighs*
I hope this got lots of reviews on the other sites you posted it on because this is amazing and deserves tons of praise!!!